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What is a girl?

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vietkidd1
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since 08-10-99
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Sacramento,CA,USA


0 posted 08-10-99 12:21 PM       View Profile for vietkidd1   Email vietkidd1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vietkidd1's Home Page   View IP for vietkidd1

WhAt Is A gIrL


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


I wish I met a girl so kind....

to show me, that I do mind...

within her heart, I wish I knew....

what was wrong, that made her do....

do is what I do not know...

why? she does not show...


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


when I see you, I cannot bare....

to see your face, I do not dare...

life's so miserable without her near...

for that, there is no cure...

I wish I met a girl to share a thought...

and given me the love she brought...


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


If only I met a girl so nice...

but that can be at a daring price....

I hope one day a girl so sweet...

could show me how to live, not to weep....


why can't I just meet a girl...

to share our lives together in this world....

to cherish eachother....

thinking of one another......


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


I can't understand, why I cannot see....

a person nomore then a deadly tree....

I wish I met a girl who understands....

what I feel is all that I demand....

so why can't you see what is tru....

all I can think about is only you....


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


so now I end this life of hell....

wishing I lived a life so well...

I pray one day I meet you soon...

a girl so pretty she glows like the moon....

if I met a girl that cares...

all I can say in a life unfair....

I love her so, shes my destiny...

I wish I knew her fantasies....

but I can't see why it cannot be...

but a dream I wish, I wish to see....


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


so now back to reality...


I meet a girl who does not see...

how much she means to me....

so down I lay, I dream away...

finding a path to lead my way....

to find a girl who cares for me....

and not a girl who hates to see,


her life living with me.....


what is a girl...

who doesn't care...

what is a girl...

who aint so fair....


written by vietkidd
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blueloon
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since 07-07-99
Posts 166
NY


1 posted 08-10-99 12:25 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

They always say the minute you stop looking is the mere minute that someone will step into your life. Stop looking and keep writing. I really enjoyed this poem!
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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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USA


2 posted 08-11-99 12:46 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Nice poem.I enjoyed it.
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