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Where love has sown

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Seymour Tabin
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Where Love has sown

Love like pollen spore has blown
And somewhere in me has sown.
And I am enceinte,
Full bloom and overblown.

The drama, a chameleon bold,
Showing radiant rainbows unfold
And transient as the clouds above
A pageant of symbols twice-told.

And its bloom peaks beauty each day,
Just like the queen of a soiree.
But the dance takes toll,
Like a Salome.

Quixotic as an angels kiss
Here and with overtones of bliss,
It rules my wake and dreams,
Each bloom a genesis.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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1 posted 08-10-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

"Love like a pollen spore" I love it.
JP
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2 posted 08-10-99 10:57 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Good job. A bit uneven in places but overall a good use of the language. I like the metaphor and similie (is that correct Nan?)

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Dum spiro, spero
JP


Seymour Tabin
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Thank you Sue and JP.
Drauntz
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4 posted 06-20-2007 04:57 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

so beautiful. truly beautiful for a soul that open to love and to love...all beautiful. the true song of love.
Artic Wind
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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