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Open Poetry #1

Where love has sown

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-10 10:31 AM

Where Love has sown

Love like pollen spore has blown
And somewhere in me has sown.
And I am enceinte,
Full bloom and overblown.

The drama, a chameleon bold,
Showing radiant rainbows unfold
And transient as the clouds above
A pageant of symbols twice-told.

And its bloom peaks beauty each day,
Just like the queen of a soiree.
But the dance takes toll,
Like a Salome.

Quixotic as an angels kiss
Here and with overtones of bliss,
It rules my wake and dreams,
Each bloom a genesis.

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

1 posted 1999-08-10 10:44 AM

"Love like a pollen spore" I love it.

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

2 posted 1999-08-10 10:57 AM

Good job. A bit uneven in places but overall a good use of the language. I like the metaphor and similie (is that correct Nan?)

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Dum spiro, spero
JP

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-10 11:29 AM

Thank you Sue and JP.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-06-20 04:57 PM

so beautiful. truly beautiful for a soul that open to love and to love...all beautiful. the true song of love.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-10 09:43 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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