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angel girl
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within a whisper...

0 posted 1999-08-10 08:46 AM


Darkened Silence hear my calls.
Release from these binding walls.
That lock me inside my own agony,
And keep me there eternally.

My pain is becoming too hard to bare,
And soon I will not even care.
My jumbled emotions control my life.
And then I look down at the knife.

It would be so easy to give up and die,
But I cannot do it, I can only cry.
So I let the knife drop to the floor,
And I walk out the kitchen door.

I don't know what I will do next,
Because my life is so complex.
So now I call on you, Darkened Silence, my friend,
Because for me, pain has no end.


[This message has been edited by angel girl (edited 08-10-99).]

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christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
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1 posted 1999-08-10 10:43 AM


This pain is real..but you have so much time ahead of you to heal and use all your adversity to do so much. When I was in 11th grade I remember not being able to look at the reality. When you are "in it" it is hard to accept that it can end..and you can thrive. Hold on to and use whatever supports you have right now. We all need people with the insight and understanding that you have to make the next generation of children feel as loved as children deserve to feel...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-08-10 11:35 AM


The advice above is very good. No one knows what the future will bring, that's the wonder of life.
angel girl
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3 posted 1999-08-11 03:59 AM


Thank you Christie and Seymour.
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