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You (a quick little thing, I was inspired...)

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 08-10-99 02:19 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

You are the sunlight flooding my sapphire skies,
The whispering wind upon which my soul flies,
The shadows of your love still kiss my face,
Sending my trembling heart to an ethereal place.
You are my shimmering angel made into breathing life,
The gentle voice that is the end to all my strife,
The one who takes my hand and wipes away crystalline tears,
Pushing away my all my doubts, easing my darkest of fears.
To tell you simply that I love you, it doesn't say a thing,
For how can three words express the happiness you bring?
Forever, a timeless eternity my love will be with you,
Trust in me, hold me close, and I will guide you through.
Never doubt what I feel for you, fully believe the words I say,
Always my love has been with you, and it shall eternally stay.
Through even the wind scattered sands of time what I speak is true,
These words are etched upon my heart, and they are my gift to you.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Terri
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1 posted 08-10-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Beautiful!

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"In everyone's life, at some time, our inner fire goes out. It is then burst into flame by an encounter with another human being. We should all be thankful for those people who rekindle the inner spirit."
--Albert Schweitzer

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on the threshold of a dream


2 posted 08-10-99 08:52 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

And a lovely gift they are! *S*
Sue
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3 posted 08-10-99 08:56 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I envy you that inspiration - and if that was quick it was still marvellously well done.
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4 posted 08-10-99 02:06 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My dear, one would almost think you were in love.

I like this one.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Alwye
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5 posted 08-10-99 03:34 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I think you'd be surprised at just how much a teen can be in love, I think...anyways, thank you for your kind words. And Sue, yeah, it was written in all of about 5 minutes.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
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6 posted 08-10-99 03:45 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Krista...this is beautifully written. I absolutely love these two lines....what a perfect sumation to a great poem.
"Through even the wind scattered sands of time what I speak is true,
These words are etched upon my heart, and they are my gift to you. "

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Alwye
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Thank you so much, hoot_owl_rn. Your words are greatly appreciated!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Severn
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8 posted 08-11-99 01:38 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

very very nice. (Quick little thing...? Well done for 5 mins!)
Alwye
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Thanks Severn!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
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10 posted 08-11-99 09:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

THAT'S WHAT I CALL 5 MINUTES WELL SPENT! IT'S BEAUTIFUL, KRISTA.
Alwye
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Thank you very much, Balladeer. I truly appreciate it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
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12 posted 08-11-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You always amaze me with your poetry! Lovely, lovely....I can't think of anything more to say!
Alwye
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Thanks very much, Ms. deVine. Your words mean a lot to me..

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Sally S.
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14 posted 08-11-99 11:09 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Very touching. Nice work....for a quickie. (hee hee) Really, it's beautiful.
~one voice~
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15 posted 08-12-99 08:36 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Alwye, sometimes, I've found, that the best works just comes to us... it just finds it's way from our hearts to our brains... That inspiration that you have found is a truly wonderful thing, isn't it? I think so... Love is a wonderful thing...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Alwye
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I do believe I agree with you, dear one voice. Yes, love is truly a wonderful thing... Thanks for your words.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Alwye
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17 posted 08-14-99 02:30 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

This fits my sentiments so much right now that I had to boost it up again...

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
 
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