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veronicas
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since 1999-08-10
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mankato,mn,america

0 posted 1999-08-10 02:08 AM


do I always have to feel this pain?
There are so many nights I sit and cry,
my tears are like rain,
falling from the sky.
I give you my love,
it seems you throw it away.
I thought god sent you straight from above
to be with me forever and a day.
Why is everything a lie?
Each lie breaks my heart
each lie causes a part of me to die.
When will you get smart?
When will you realize what you've done?
When will you see what's happening to me?

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veronica smith

© Copyright 1999 veronicas - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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since 1999-08-04
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France
1 posted 1999-08-10 11:05 AM


I feel your pain in what you have written.
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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2 posted 1999-08-11 01:36 AM


Very sad and very brave of you to share such a precious part of you so soon.
RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-02-11 07:08 PM


love hurts when it turns bad.
its kind of mysterious.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-01 05:00 AM


I feel this too
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