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My Will

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PrincessDoo
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since 07-30-99
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0 posted 08-09-99 08:46 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

To you leave my broken heart
to which you were to make amends
none of the love you professed
could make up for the lost attention

to you i leave my torn mental
of which you destroyed with verbal abuse
taking hits on me, to relieve you
not thinking of the daughter you are to lose

to you i leave my fading embrace
of which was to comfort you in time of need
but tensions and frictions seperated us
and now from this burden you are freed

to you i leave my mind
which you thought possessed some knowledge
sorry to disappoint you but sometimes
"i hate you" can push you over the edge

to you i leave my tears
for it was you that caused them all
this you is I, preparing inside
for final fatal fall...

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Artur Hawkwing
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1 posted 08-09-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

It was one that struck a chilling note in me... I have endured mental abuse, and so I know where you are coming back... no one among my two step-brothers and I would defend against this mental abuse but I. They thought they had conquered understanding the heart, and when I did things wrong at golf, I was called stupid sometimes. Which's why I hate golf now. And they said they knew my heart. Sometimes the best counterstrike is to ignore.
 
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