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PrincessDoo
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since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-08-09 08:46 PM


To you leave my broken heart
to which you were to make amends
none of the love you professed
could make up for the lost attention

to you i leave my torn mental
of which you destroyed with verbal abuse
taking hits on me, to relieve you
not thinking of the daughter you are to lose

to you i leave my fading embrace
of which was to comfort you in time of need
but tensions and frictions seperated us
and now from this burden you are freed

to you i leave my mind
which you thought possessed some knowledge
sorry to disappoint you but sometimes
"i hate you" can push you over the edge

to you i leave my tears
for it was you that caused them all
this you is I, preparing inside
for final fatal fall...

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Artur Hawkwing
Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
1 posted 1999-08-09 10:40 PM


It was one that struck a chilling note in me... I have endured mental abuse, and so I know where you are coming back... no one among my two step-brothers and I would defend against this mental abuse but I. They thought they had conquered understanding the heart, and when I did things wrong at golf, I was called stupid sometimes. Which's why I hate golf now. And they said they knew my heart. Sometimes the best counterstrike is to ignore.
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