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Soft Sadness

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Capulet[R+J]
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since 08-07-99
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


0 posted 08-09-99 07:15 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]


Hi, I mistakingly posted this poem in the wrong forum, but here it is..

Pure was this tear that fell so deeply
onto my skin,
Falling from these eyes of heaven, that
washes away my sin.
To never feel your kiss again, comes pain
of which I never knew,
In sadness do my eyes begin to follow,
to catch a glimpse of a love that once
was true.
I fear you will never miss my touch, of
kisses in the night,
Never long to call my name, in the
whispers of the light.
Here I sit, a naked child, watching love
be swept away,
Here I sit, a naked boy, as you leave
with no words to say.
Pure was this tear that falls lightly
into my hands,
tears that fall from heavens eyes,
to the sound of the angels dance.
I watch as you gather strength to leave,
not to look into my eyes,
I watch as you close this door on us,
my lonliess to be the price.
I fall to my kness and grasp what is true,
the sounds of silence taunt me swiftly,
of our laughter which once I knew.
Pure was this tear that falls silently
from my eyes,
but pure no more from stains of hatred
in my crys.


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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..
© Copyright 1999 Capulet[R+J] - All Rights Reserved
Rhiannon
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since 07-28-99
Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA


1 posted 08-09-99 07:20 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

This poem really touched me. We've all been there, and it's good to see someone express it so eloquently.
PrincessDoo
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since 07-30-99
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA


2 posted 08-09-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

everyone must have been there
but i am still there

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ShellBelle
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since 08-06-99
Posts 12


3 posted 08-09-99 09:16 PM       View Profile for ShellBelle   Email ShellBelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShellBelle

Your poem expresses incredibly detailed imagery. It certainly draws me in as a reader. It is incredible to see such tear-jerking feelings translated so beautifully into words.

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A friend is someone who reaches for your hand
... and touches your heart.

ShellBelle
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4 posted 08-09-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for ShellBelle   Email ShellBelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShellBelle

I look forward to reading more of your poems.



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Capulet[R+J]
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since 08-07-99
Posts 42
Calgary,Alberta Canada


5 posted 08-09-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]

Thanks all for your kind words.
It really makes me feel nice when people
like what I write.
And yeah, I'm still there, Thats why
I wrote it.
Alwye
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since 06-16-99
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In the space between moments


6 posted 08-10-99 01:38 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

This is a wonderful piece, Capulet. So sad...but a beautiful flow of words. Great work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
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