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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
Why'd you stay away for so long? I'm so alone when you're gone Weeks go by without a word Told you how I feel, but you never heard You never listen and you'll never know How I feel - how I miss you so You'll never know how I cried You'll never know how I feel inside Why'd you have to sleep around? Take off the halo and golden crown. You're not worthy of my love You're not the man I dreamed of You never listen and you'll never know How I feel - how you hurt me so You'll never know how I cried You'll never know how I feel inside Now you're sleepin alone at night That girl ain't around to hold you tight I hear from you the next day Tell me how you wish that you had stayed You never listen and you'll never know How I feel - how you hurt your soul You'll never know how to give You'll never know tenderness You'll never know the meaning of a kiss You'll never know the the truth of love You'll wish you did when you've had enough Now I'm happy - I don't need you Don't need the lies that you put me through I hope you realize what you've thrown away I hope you miss me the rest of your days *****this ones written more to be a song, but I have no definate melody - I just wrote. ------------------ www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
This poem had really good rhythm. It's also a nice way to tell someone exactly what a jerk they are without coming off as one yourself. I really relate to this one. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I've seen people do that, and I think it's terrible. There's nothing more pathetic (sorry) than someone breaking using people only when the other side ain't so green... Nice poem moonlight, I agree that it has a nice rythm... ------------------ Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars. -Unknown- So let the sun beat down upon my face, It's warmth will dry my tears. |
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