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Moonlight
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Auburn, Alabama USA


0 posted 08-09-99 06:31 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

Why'd you stay away for so long?
I'm so alone when you're gone
Weeks go by without a word
Told you how I feel, but you never heard

You never listen and you'll never know
How I feel - how I miss you so
You'll never know how I cried
You'll never know how I feel inside

Why'd you have to sleep around?
Take off the halo and golden crown.
You're not worthy of my love
You're not the man I dreamed of

You never listen and you'll never know
How I feel - how you hurt me so
You'll never know how I cried
You'll never know how I feel inside

Now you're sleepin alone at night
That girl ain't around to hold you tight
I hear from you the next day
Tell me how you wish that you had stayed

You never listen and you'll never know
How I feel - how you hurt your soul
You'll never know how to give
You'll never know tenderness
You'll never know the meaning of a kiss
You'll never know the the truth of love
You'll wish you did when you've had enough

Now I'm happy - I don't need you
Don't need the lies that you put me through
I hope you realize what you've thrown away
I hope you miss me the rest of your days

*****this ones written more to be a song, but I have no definate melody - I just wrote.

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Rhiannon
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since 07-28-99
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1 posted 08-09-99 07:18 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

This poem had really good rhythm. It's also a nice way to tell someone exactly what a jerk they are without coming off as one yourself. I really relate to this one.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 08-09-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I've seen people do that, and I think it's terrible. There's nothing more pathetic (sorry) than someone breaking using people only when the other side ain't so green...
Nice poem moonlight, I agree that it has a nice rythm...

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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars.
-Unknown-
So let the sun beat down upon my face,
It's warmth will dry my tears.
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