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Rhiannon
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since 07-28-99
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0 posted 08-09-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

There's that and then another
And I love you like no other
As my thoughts begin to travel
My feelings will unravel
And I'll forever lay in pieces before you
The power of this love has blinded me
I knew you couldn't give me
What I needed to survive you
I knew you couldn't give me
A reason to keep it alive, you
Fooled me into believing, and now
I'll forever lay in pieces before you
Pieces we know I'll never recover
Pieces of feelings I'll never discover-
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PrincessDoo
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since 07-30-99
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1 posted 08-09-99 08:15 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

this was very good

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Severn
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2 posted 08-11-99 01:55 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice work, Rhiannon.
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