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elvira
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0 posted 1999-08-09 05:03 PM




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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 1999-08-09 06:16 PM


Lady E: I'm happy to report after six plus years I still give my wife a gift on every 22nd of the month to celebrate our wedding day. And she thought it would stop after the first year! There are times we still turn to eachother with pleasant amazement that we are married. (We were friends in high school and lost track of one another after graduation, only to cross paths eight years later) But it is so true that for some things change quickly. I hear it said ever so often "He was wonderful, right up to the time he said 'I do.'"


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-08-09 07:55 PM


You hit the spot on this one. My 57th is this month and it seems like yesterday.
Beautiful poem.

Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-08-09 08:03 PM


Elvira, you continue to say the most with the fewest words.
elvira
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4 posted 1999-08-09 08:44 PM




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