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hodge
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since 06-21-99
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Shannon, IL 61078


0 posted 08-09-99 04:36 PM       View Profile for hodge   Email hodge   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hodge

Life
By:Jeremy Rogers

Life is a sparkling flower,
Flowing with colors from the rainbow of God,
Shinning with the rays of a summer sun,
But someday that flower must wither away

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Jeremy Rogers
© Copyright 1999 hodge - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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1 posted 08-09-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

for constructive criticism, you may want to post this is the "critical analysis" forum...Welcome hodge

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...break my heart...are you ready?...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia
...devotion...too soon...07-20-69...craving...Master...chat?...apart...plain...hush...then...vice...shameless self promotion
hodge
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2 posted 08-09-99 05:46 PM       View Profile for hodge   Email hodge   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hodge

thank you i will do that
RainbowGirl
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What happens when the flower has withered?

All flowers give off beauty either in petals, smell or radiance, the way they turn their heads towards the sun..:-))

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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