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guiltborn
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0 posted 08-09-99 12:38 PM       View Profile for guiltborn   Email guiltborn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit guiltborn's Home Page   View IP for guiltborn

In what joy does he take in the streaks that stain my face?
Is pleasure wrought when my heart again falls in pieces?
What lesson learned in her passing?
What reason could there be to rip from me beauty and replace it with bitter vengeance?
None!
He blamed but blameless,
In deep recesses of my heart I know this true but itís easier to find blame
Than to live with questions unanswered.
Deep runs my love for him, but so does my love for her.
His fault that her breath no longer comes?
His mistake that fate chose her?
Was I no more an equal subject for fate to take?
Why was my life chosen to outlast hers?
No wrong made she.
No lesson learned in her death.
Others, who like me, follow his law,
Tell me words that are not backed by thought.
His plan say they,
His hand say they,
For the greater good say they.
Blind sheep following easy answers say I.
In my heart, I know if for a greater good might she still be here.
For if His plan is my losing herÖ

Then in His plan to lose I as well?


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"What dreams may come?"

Guiltborn


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INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
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1 posted 08-09-99 12:51 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Well done. You capture the frustration of unanswered questions well. Yes, there is a plan....no I do not have the answers. Yes, I have thought about it a lot. I still hope to someday have my questions answered.

INclan
tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


2 posted 08-09-99 01:55 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

If love be true,thine heart shall find
If not this life, in another time

I truly admire you work guiltborn .. sorry its taken me so long to say it..!

Thinking!!
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.



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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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Arkansas


3 posted 08-10-99 03:52 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I feel your pain - just let it go...
I know it's hard to not ask "why"...
To find so many tears to cry...

I feel your anger - let it go...
Try to believe there is a reason
A time for everything in season.

** Focus all your angry energy on her - Her beauty, her lovely ways, the things you loved most about her. And instead of battling within yourself, think instead of her beauty - her gentleness and how lucky you were to have known her. She will live on forever in your heart, so give her a warm place to live on, not a cold heart filled with anger & dispair...She is with you always, so live as the fortunate being you are to have had her in your life...some of us weren't lucky enough to even know her...Lots of love - Gennifer


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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