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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 08-09-99 11:38 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Keep it in, keep it in,
do not let him see you cry.
No matter what spews from his mouth,
look him eye to eye.

He doesn’t like the way you lived life
so many moons ago,
but for some reason he made you his wife
‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so.

Oh you love him, you know it
and you’ve got reason to show it;
he’s just got a mouth and a stoic mind
Nevertheless you think him blind.

Outspoken and outstanding,
so he shall always be;
Don’t you let him see you crying
for the you you’ve come to be.

09 Aug 99


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© KRJ
Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 06-08-2007 02:24 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Keep it in, keep it in,
do not let him see you cry.
No matter what spews from his mouth,
look him eye to eye.

He doesn’t like the way you lived life
so many moons ago,
but for some reason he made you his wife
‘tho sometimes you wished ‘twasn’t so.

Outspoken and outstanding,
so he shall always be;
Don’t you let him see you crying
for the you you’ve come to be.

09 Aug 99


I think this has so much power.

Alison
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2 posted 06-08-2007 08:35 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Alison...

you took away my goose-egg (0) poem.



Thank you for sneaking up on me from a post almost 8 years old!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


3 posted 11-12-2007 09:03 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Beautiful Sunshine

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