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To this I swear

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-09-99 09:26 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To this I Swear

She patterns my life like a play.
With love and deeds a page each day.
To make a sweet serenity.

Yet she says we rule the same.
Equal love and equal blame
And equal share fraternity.

We sipped the wine of wedded bliss.
And held the promise of the kiss.
And kept our faith and purity.

And heaven could not bid us more.
No matter of, which side the door?
In lovers faith and chastity.

So why do I, this calmest sea,
Feel doldrums of anxiety?
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elvira
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1 posted 08-09-99 03:15 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

when anxiety comes haunting you...things may be "too good to be true"...i enjoyed the meter and rhyme of this poem tremendously

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I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone. ~Morrissey~
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 08-09-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Thank you Elvira for the kind words.
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When things seem too good, we always feel anxiety wondering what might go wrong. The man with nothing to lose, fears nothing. The rest feel anxiety.



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Lucie
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4 posted 08-09-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I really enjoyed reading this one. I liked the way it flowed.. very smooth.
Seymour Tabin
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To Lucie and Balladeer, thank you for the comments. they mean alot.
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always love to read your complaining about life, because it is soo fair, so good to you.

enjoyed.
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enjoyed

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