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Sue
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0 posted 08-09-99 07:17 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sue

It's rained today since early morning
Angels crying in the sky
Crystal drops each leaf adorning
Bees and birds too wet to fly.
Trees and flowers all saturated
Cow in byre and pig in sty.
All the world is concentrated
On the task of keeping dry.
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Poetwheel
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1 posted 08-09-99 07:21 AM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

I really loved the ending of this one...I found it quite cute.

Nice job.

PW
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Well done, Sue. I like the rain and ferquently stand out in storms. You are probably right...it isn't safe but I don't care. Thank you for sharing.

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