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Open Poetry #1

Moon Prancer

Twilight_Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 22
USA

0 posted 1999-08-08 08:39 PM

She stalks and prowls through the creeping night
She parades the lost forrest showing no fright
Her body is long and sleek with an agitated tail
Her eyes a flaming glow making her other features frail
A single silver star stands right across her chest
As if to say "I'm different from the rest"
Her coat is pure black full of an unearthly gleam
Her beauty is so striking she is a walking dream
When I feel the pain dissolving my skin
She always knows when to let me in
Her tail arches tall as she encircles my feet
Her eyes glow as her purr keeps a comforting beat
When she knows she has brightened my day
She goes back to her usual way
She slinks out the door and turns back for a last sight
Then she flips her tail back and fades into the night

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-08-09 12:55 PM

I really liked this, great job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-08-09 01:16 AM

though my kitties are white, this was a sweet poem

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I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone. ~Morrissey~

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

3 posted 1999-08-09 04:53 AM

i really liked this. it does seem that pets can understand us and give us comfort and understanding when we need it.
great poem. can't wait for more.

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delight in the little things.

Twilight_Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 22
USA

4 posted 1999-08-09 09:03 AM

Thank you for the great responses!!! I'm glad you liked my poem!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 1999-08-09 10:14 AM

I liked this... being butler for a cat may be a nuisance... but it definitely has its rewards!

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