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Moon Prancer

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Twilight_Angel
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0 posted 08-08-99 08:39 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

She stalks and prowls through the creeping night
She parades the lost forrest showing no fright
Her body is long and sleek with an agitated tail
Her eyes a flaming glow making her other features frail
A single silver star stands right across her chest
As if to say "I'm different from the rest"
Her coat is pure black full of an unearthly gleam
Her beauty is so striking she is a walking dream
When I feel the pain dissolving my skin
She always knows when to let me in
Her tail arches tall as she encircles my feet
Her eyes glow as her purr keeps a comforting beat
When she knows she has brightened my day
She goes back to her usual way
She slinks out the door and turns back for a last sight
Then she flips her tail back and fades into the night
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-09-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I really liked this, great job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
elvira
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2 posted 08-09-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

though my kitties are white, this was a sweet poem


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angel girl
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within a whisper...


3 posted 08-09-99 04:53 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

i really liked this. it does seem that pets can understand us and give us comfort and understanding when we need it.
great poem. can't wait for more.


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delight in the little things.
Twilight_Angel
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4 posted 08-09-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Thank you for the great responses!!! I'm glad you liked my poem!
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 08-09-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked this... being butler for a cat may be a nuisance... but it definitely has its rewards!
 
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