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mia
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0 posted 08-08-99 08:48 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia


Forgive me
for I cannot grasp
thoughts
feelings
words
I do not understand
how you can
whisper love
when you have
yet to see
what makes me
your words enchant
my heart
but they remain
lies
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INclan
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1 posted 08-08-99 08:51 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Thank you, Mia. A jaundiced look at an ealry relationship. You capture a skeptical attitude well.
hoot_owl_rn
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Mia....I understand this one quite well.....there are so many that make promises before they care to see who you really are. How can you love someone you do not know?

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A nice poem Mia.

But I don't really think that the words people say in the beginning are necessarily lies.

It is a powerful thing, the beginnings of the spark between two people. Sometimes you make things seem more important that they are, despite the fledgling nature of the relationship. I am sure we are all guilty of it.

Niceley done Mia, you managed to make me actually _think_ about something

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Alain DeLaCendres
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4 posted 08-09-99 04:50 PM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

Very thoughful...

I like it mia. Keep posting and I'll keep reading.

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5 posted 08-09-99 08:51 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very thought-provoking words. I think sometimes we say what we hope to be true, without having had time to know yet for sure. Thank you, Mia.
 
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