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A Lament

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Sue
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0 posted 08-08-99 08:47 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sue

It seems I'm labouring under a curse,
Why does nobody read my verse?
Post as I might,
Response is slight
But I get to read yours, things could be worse.
© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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1 posted 08-08-99 09:00 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Sue my dear,
It's never clear
Why thoughts are left unsaid.
But, be of cheer,
A response is here
Concerning the words I've read.


Do your best and your popularity will grow with your skills.

INclan
Sue
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2 posted 08-08-99 09:02 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Thank you, INclan, for those encouraging words. But how will my skill grow if no-one tells me what is wrong?
hoot_owl_rn
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Sue,
When it comes to reading great poetry, that can never be bad. As far as lack of response, the response will come once people get to know your work a bit better...in the mean time, keep plugging away at it.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Sue
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Thanks, Hoot, I will.
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