(i wasnt going to submit this, but i am, so this is for mia)
you were my life i lived for you i gave myself to you to do with as you pleased but you wanted more and i have nothing else to give i give, you take but you know i will always give more so lets stop this game because i dont want to play nobody wins and now i try to get on with life life without you what was once unimaginable is now the reality i face for you were once my life and now we may never meet again i know thoughts of you will always pass in my mind as we grow apart you are still with me as i know you will always be maybe thats love's greatest testament for you may lose love but true love never goes away
I don't know what to say. It was beautiful. Maybe I will sound full of myself but was this written for me? If so, I really don't understand it. So I'm guessing that it was for a beautiful princess by the name of Mia (that is why I chose the name, because of all those dreamy storytales...)that once broke your heart. The poem was nicely written.
keep posting... m.
hey... i've felt THIS way before.. that's for sure... you have a very honest, open style, which I admire. (that is, unless you made this whole thing up, which is your perogative as a writer... hehehe). Seriously, pretty darned straight forward! I'm impressed with that.
Well...don't I feel smart..hahaha! It was a beautiful poem. I haven't posted in so long... I feel like poetry has left me... So I guess I'm not all that peachy right now... But don't stop posting... Eventually I will come back, and when I do...I'm expecting a whole lot of verses to sooth my sad soul...
Sorry for the misunderstanding, I really feel stupid. Anyways... before I put my foot in my mouth again...
Sitting in Michael's Lap