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evolution
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ma, usa


0 posted 08-08-99 12:50 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

(i wasnt going to submit this, but i am, so this is for mia)

you were my life
i lived for you
i gave myself to you
to do with as you pleased
but you wanted more
and i have nothing else to give
i give, you take
but you know i will always give more
so lets stop this game
because i dont want to play
nobody wins
and now i try to get on with life
life without you
what was once unimaginable
is now the reality i face
for you were once my life
and now we may never meet again
i know thoughts of you will always pass in my mind
as we grow apart
you are still with me
as i know you will always be
maybe thats love's greatest testament
for you may lose love
but true love never goes away
© Copyright 1999 evolution - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 08-08-99 08:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm glad you did post this...I really enjoyed it.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
mia
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2 posted 08-13-99 06:38 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I don't know what to say. It was beautiful. Maybe I will sound full of myself but was this written for me? If so, I really don't understand it. So I'm guessing that it was for a beautiful princess by the name of Mia (that is why I chose the name, because of all those dreamy storytales...)that once broke your heart. The poem was nicely written.

keep posting...
m.
evolution
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ma, usa


3 posted 08-13-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

it wasnt written for you, but i submitted it for you. i havent really had the desire to post lately but i will for you. dont ask me why, for some reason i think youre peachy
pandora
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since 07-26-99
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4 posted 08-13-99 10:31 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

hey... i've felt THIS way before.. that's for sure... you have a very honest, open style, which I admire. (that is, unless you made this whole thing up, which is your perogative as a writer... hehehe). Seriously, pretty darned straight forward! I'm impressed with that.
mia
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5 posted 08-20-99 09:11 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Well...don't I feel smart..hahaha! It was a beautiful poem. I haven't posted in so long... I feel like poetry has left me... So I guess I'm not all that peachy right now... But don't stop posting... Eventually I will come back, and when I do...I'm expecting a whole lot of verses to sooth my sad soul...

Sorry for the misunderstanding, I really feel stupid. Anyways... before I put my foot in my mouth again...

m
Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


6 posted 08-20-99 09:16 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Poignant. Your sincerity is captivating.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

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