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with tears in my eyes

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Rita
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since 07-19-99
Posts 56
Danville Va. 24540


0 posted 08-08-99 12:15 AM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

I look into the eyes, of the one I knew well,
and now i know not, the feelings that dwell.
My words become silent, I know not what to say,
and my heart hardens, becoming dark and grey.
You were my sun, and once my moon,
and with one kiss, my heart would swoon.
I loved you with every depth of my heart,
and now I know, that we're finally apart.
I can not explain the way i feel,
because now the memories, are becoming unreal.
You were my thoughts, my breath, and my voice,
and loving you, was never a choice.
I want to run to you, and hold you tight,
but around you is a wall, that i can not fight.
Why do you always, just turn away?
Why dont you ever, have words to say?
You made me promise, to never leave you,
and only my promise, was the one to stay true.
And now I write with tears in my eyes,
alone and broken, lost in lies.
© Copyright 1999 Rita - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 08-07-99
Posts 525


1 posted 08-08-99 12:19 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done.I can feel the saddness of the person in this poem.Love lost is the hardest to deal with.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 08-08-99 08:13 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Such sad heartfelt words expressed so elloquently

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
INclan
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since 07-20-99
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Indiana, USA


3 posted 08-08-99 08:48 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely done and well said.
 
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