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In Storms

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Capulet[R+J]
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since 08-07-99
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


0 posted 08-07-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]

Hello, just something I wrote a bit ago.

In storms was the night that shatterd ground,
Thunder that rolled the hills so proud.
As lightning drew the light of day, an
illusion of the sun that would rise and stay.
In darkness do the shadows come,
hiding fears for few, and creating for some.
Drops of rain that crash the Earth, spew
down from the clouds that shake the hurt.
An Illusion was the storm that shaked
the night, false was the thunder and all
its might. Illusions was the lightning
that drew the light, and fear was
the shadows that striked.
Faith was the sun that shined that day,
an illusion in faith that the sun would
stay.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..
© Copyright 1999 Capulet[R+J] - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-07-99 11:02 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful!!

P.S. I like your name..I am a big fan of R & J....

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


2 posted 08-07-99 11:22 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

An interesting poem. I enjoyed your choice of words and verb tenses.
Capulet[R+J]
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since 08-07-99
Posts 42
Calgary,Alberta Canada


3 posted 08-07-99 11:26 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]

Thankyou

I'm a fan of R+J too, the story,
the theme, I think it's great.
Dragoness
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4 posted 08-08-99 12:08 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done ! I enjoyed this!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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