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PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-08-07 04:16 PM


Sorry baby, i lost the game
I tried to hide it deep inside
and supress the shame
so here comes the end of the ride

Sorry baby, i lost the game
too many negative points built up
and i couldnt take the blame
now then end..pills and a cup

Sorry baby, i lost the game
i dont know if i can change
from the #1 spot on Loser Hall of Fame
my life will end with a silent bang

Sorry baby, i lost the game
how can i trust this mind of mine?
wild mind i'm afraid to tame
death contract i gotta sign

Sorry baby, i lost the game
no score, no strength, no where to run
no way no how i'll ever be the same
no sun no fun, cuz i'm just done

I'm sorry baby, but I lost the game
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PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-08-07 11:47 PM


anybody??

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-07 11:47 PM


Sounds like someone is having a really difficult time. Things will get better. Don't let people mess with your head.
Look up! you've done a good job putting your feelings into this!

PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA
3 posted 1999-08-07 11:51 PM


the thing is... to a good friend of mine... life is a game.. and he tries to make it his goal not to lose.. and every bad thing that happens, its negative points... so eventually if you do enough bad things then your on the way to losing.. and then when you die inside.. you lose...

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PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA
4 posted 1999-08-08 02:36 PM


comments??
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