How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Deception??
 1 2 3
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Deception??

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 07-30-99
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA


0 posted 08-07-99 04:13 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

sunny days and blue skies
tainted by a handful of lies
coming from the fun in the sun
"i know what you did, now make it undone"

i'm not the victim but i am the criminal
so everyone hates cuz i put them thru bull

protect the man that needs protecting
he doesnt deserve the pain he been collectin
punish her for what she's done
dont give up, dont let her run
hate her till the she cries out in pain
make her unleash the blood to drain
she deserves the pain she put everyone thru
hurt her bad, the way she did you...

just tell me who you think the "deceptor" is in this poem.. you might be surprised...

------------------
823
© Copyright 1999 PrincessDoo - All Rights Reserved
INclan
Senior Member
since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


1 posted 08-07-99 11:30 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

A thought provoking question.....I have my ideas but will keep them to myself for the time being.

INclan
PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 07-30-99
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA


2 posted 08-07-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

i would really like to know what you think....

------------------
823
PrincessDoo
Junior Member
since 07-30-99
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA


3 posted 08-08-99 02:38 PM       View Profile for PrincessDoo   Email PrincessDoo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessDoo

commmentssss???
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Deception?? Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors