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Seymour Tabin
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Acceptance

Emotions and oceans, entwine
Where sand and mind the concubine.
The cradle sways a quiet tree
The lullaby of ennui.
Death strikes like a stone in a pond
After the crash ripples respond
Trough and cave and ripple and wave
A viscus remorse veils the grave.
And stars above the ocean sit,
They ring me like an opiate.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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I've already read this one three times and I'm going back for more...
Dragoness
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I loved this!!

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Very nice

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Seymour Tabin
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Just want to thank you lovely people.
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Lovely.

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very good, very good love
"Emotions and oceans, entwine
Where sand and mind the concubine."
beautiful.

enjoyed
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enjoyed

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