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suthern
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0 posted 1999-08-07 11:36 AM


Everything I'd wished to say
When at last the moment came
Scrambled into useless chatter
Succumbed to despair and pain.
My heart longed to talk to you
And dared to hope for your reply
But silence cruelly sealed my lips
And hope shriveled up to die.
Then you took me in your arms
And shyness left, leaving no trace
For all was said without a word
In the warmth of our embrace.

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Toerag
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1 posted 1999-08-07 11:43 AM


ALRIGHT! A happy one!......And a fine one I might add.....Now give us summoe!
suthern
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2 posted 1999-08-07 11:45 AM


ROFL... but you KNOW I don't write happy! LOL. I depend on you for that! *G* (For the writing and the happiness... *G* Smooch!)
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-08-07 04:58 PM


Enjoyed the poem you write well.
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 1999-08-07 05:02 PM


very nicely done. Belle. Regret turning to happiness. What more could a poetic heart want?
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5 posted 1999-08-07 09:13 PM


Nicely done...lots of meaning in this one

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Dragoness
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6 posted 1999-08-07 09:20 PM


Nicely done! I loved this!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

elvira
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7 posted 1999-08-09 11:51 PM


a yearning sigh...is my reply
tori
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8 posted 1999-08-10 12:46 PM


I loved this one.. Job well done
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

suthern
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9 posted 1999-08-10 07:53 AM


Thank you all.... very much!!!!
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