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Isabel

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-07-99 08:46 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Isabel

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
From the lava mountains came,
Heightened heights of ice from flame,
Sermon symbols of her name.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
My agonies, my ecstasies,
My bell that tolls both qualities
And seems to sail on fantasies?

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
A tongue that double strike my mind
The hell that I would leave behind
And all the heaven I would find.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
This gift of life with me the heir,
Heaven a sense beyond compare
And hell a cross that I must bear.

Heaven and hell my Isabel,
Spirit of the cell I dwell,
Bell, the echo and the knell,
Heaven and hell my Isabel.

Heaven, the fruition of need,
And hell is in doing the deed.
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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 08-07-99 09:14 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hey! I like this style... think I'll just try to plagiarize it for my own use... heh heh heh

Incidently, I also liked the way you led me through that into the concluding lines...
Nan
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2 posted 08-07-99 11:43 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, Sy..... Ya done good!!!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-07-99 04:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Thank you LngJhnAg and Nan
Balladeer
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4 posted 08-07-99 05:30 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

As striking as when I first heard it....you must know this Isabel pretty well....good job, Sy.
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5 posted 08-07-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice form, rhyme and rhythym in this one. It is really a nice piece of work.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Dragoness
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This was wonderful!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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7 posted 06-20-2007 04:45 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

again, one of my favorite. have read the revised version. So very good, the love and the truth.

enjoyed
Artic Wind
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enjoyed

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9 posted 12-24-2011 05:54 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

There are only a few that can rhyme like Si, and here's to you and Isabel.  You are in our thoughts.
nakdthoughts
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Thank you Sharon for bringing these forward~~

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Very Nice.
 
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