The love that was never meant to be

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P.Z
Junior Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 15
Singapore

0 posted 1999-08-07 07:32 AM

A serene summer night.
The moon acting as the lovers' light.
Two of them sitting side by side.
Gazing out at the star-lit sky.

She:
I looked into his eyes.
And willed myself not to cry.
I know he loves me with all his heart.
But yet today,we must part.
Then I reached out for his hand.
To let him know that I understand.
We were lovers not meant to be.
Though my love for him will never cease.

He:
She's so beautiful and so delicate.
It just breaks my heart to see her hurt.
I could feel her pain when she touched my hand.
How I wish I could always be her man...

She:
He told me that everything would be fine.
but we both knew that it was just a lie.
For when light breaks and the sun rise,
It will be time to say goodbye.

He:
I looked into her beautiful eyes for one last time.
They looked soulful instead of their usual shine.
Then I bid her farewell,in the usual way we do.
Giving her a kiss,and saying,"I love you too.."

She:
I could still feel his lingering kiss on my lips.
It was then that I felt a tear slowly slip.
Cause I knew that there wont ever be a you and me.
For this was a love not meant to be.

pusskatt
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 30
Austrralia

1 posted 1999-08-07 08:02 AM

Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye...

pusskatt
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 30
Austrralia

2 posted 1999-08-07 08:02 AM

Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye...

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 1999-08-07 09:47 AM

nicely structured around the thoughts of each person. I liked it a lot.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

4 posted 1999-08-07 04:43 PM

Oh, this is so sad! Wonderfully painted picture though, I must say!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

5 posted 1999-08-07 07:30 PM

How sad true love can be... Well done though! Nicely focused on both lovers' perspectives. You know, this poem reminded me a lot of one I wrote just recently, and the similarities are striking! See if my poem doesn't come across to you as being a twin of your's... it's called My Love With the Emerald Eyes and it's in this forum somewhere witht he posts of the last 5-7 days. It's weird how they're so much the same!!! Anyway... great job on this one, hope to see more in the future!

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

6 posted 1999-08-07 08:50 PM

Nicely done.But sad.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

P.Z
Junior Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 15
Singapore

7 posted 1999-08-08 12:54 PM

Thank you people..for all your kind comments.
To Emmy:I couldnt find your poem.Perhaps you could send it to me?
: )

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