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The love that was never meant to be

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P.Z
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since 07-03-99
Posts 15
Singapore


0 posted 08-07-99 07:32 AM       View Profile for P.Z   Email P.Z   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit P.Z's Home Page   View IP for P.Z


A serene summer night.
The moon acting as the lovers' light.
Two of them sitting side by side.
Gazing out at the star-lit sky.

She:
I looked into his eyes.
And willed myself not to cry.
I know he loves me with all his heart.
But yet today,we must part.
Then I reached out for his hand.
To let him know that I understand.
We were lovers not meant to be.
Though my love for him will never cease.

He:
She's so beautiful and so delicate.
It just breaks my heart to see her hurt.
I could feel her pain when she touched my hand.
How I wish I could always be her man...

She:
He told me that everything would be fine.
but we both knew that it was just a lie.
For when light breaks and the sun rise,
It will be time to say goodbye.

He:
I looked into her beautiful eyes for one last time.
They looked soulful instead of their usual shine.
Then I bid her farewell,in the usual way we do.
Giving her a kiss,and saying,"I love you too.."

She:
I could still feel his lingering kiss on my lips.
It was then that I felt a tear slowly slip.
Cause I knew that there wont ever be a you and me.
For this was a love not meant to be.
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pusskatt
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since 07-22-99
Posts 30
Austrralia


1 posted 08-07-99 08:02 AM       View Profile for pusskatt   Email pusskatt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pusskatt

Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye...
pusskatt
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since 07-22-99
Posts 30
Austrralia


2 posted 08-07-99 08:02 AM       View Profile for pusskatt   Email pusskatt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pusskatt

Beautiful! A tear slipped from my eye...
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


3 posted 08-07-99 09:47 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

nicely structured around the thoughts of each person. I liked it a lot.
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


4 posted 08-07-99 04:43 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh, this is so sad! Wonderfully painted picture though, I must say!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Emmy
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5 posted 08-07-99 07:30 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

How sad true love can be... Well done though! Nicely focused on both lovers' perspectives. You know, this poem reminded me a lot of one I wrote just recently, and the similarities are striking! See if my poem doesn't come across to you as being a twin of your's... it's called My Love With the Emerald Eyes and it's in this forum somewhere witht he posts of the last 5-7 days. It's weird how they're so much the same!!! Anyway... great job on this one, hope to see more in the future!
Dragoness
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since 08-07-99
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6 posted 08-07-99 08:50 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done.But sad.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
P.Z
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since 07-03-99
Posts 15
Singapore


7 posted 08-08-99 12:54 AM       View Profile for P.Z   Email P.Z   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit P.Z's Home Page   View IP for P.Z

Thank you people..for all your kind comments.
To Emmy:I couldnt find your poem.Perhaps you could send it to me?
: )
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