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redwriter1
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0 posted 08-07-99 01:04 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

Tell me are you married?
Does your husband know?
Is he waiting home for you?
Do you have to go?
How long have you waited?
I know just what you're talking about
We never know what love is
Till we know what it's not

Tell me does he see you?
and how you look to me?
does he see the light in your eyes?
and how much you're in need?

How long have you waited?
I know just what you're talking
about
You never know what love is
till we know what it's not

I'ts not slamming doors
and winning wars
reviviing old memories
I'ts holding close and hanging on
for such dear life
cause too soon it's all gone

So tell me are you married?
and
Does your husband know??


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Lucie
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1 posted 08-07-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I liked this one.. especially the last few lines.. sometimes they do forget. Good job!
~one voice~
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2 posted 08-07-99 03:28 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

So true... we don't know what love is until we know what it's not... very good poem.

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"She looked at her life
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constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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3 posted 08-07-99 03:34 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Very married.. I loved this piece alot.. Sometimes people forget..

Love,
Lady

Love is not blind it sees more not less for if it sees more then it is willing to see less.
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