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are you married? |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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Tell me are you married? Does your husband know? Is he waiting home for you? Do you have to go? How long have you waited? I know just what you're talking about We never know what love is Till we know what it's not Tell me does he see you? and how you look to me? does he see the light in your eyes? and how much you're in need? How long have you waited? I know just what you're talking about You never know what love is till we know what it's not I'ts not slamming doors and winning wars reviviing old memories I'ts holding close and hanging on for such dear life cause too soon it's all gone So tell me are you married? and Does your husband know?? ------------------ Kay-lynn |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I liked this one.. especially the last few lines.. sometimes they do forget. Good job! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
So true... we don't know what love is until we know what it's not... very good poem.  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Very married.. I loved this piece alot.. Sometimes people forget.. Love, Lady Love is not blind it sees more not less for if it sees more then it is willing to see less. |
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