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Balladeer
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0 posted 08-06-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

She said you want?
He said ok
She said we stand?
He said we'll lay.
She said my gown
He said it's off.
She said don't be..
He said too rough?
She said in yet?
He said yeah, why?
She said you sure?
He said you're dry.
She said your touch
He said that help?
She said not much
He said you whelp!
She said you done?
HE said the end.
She said so long.
He said bye friend.
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-06-99 10:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I said it was good
He said it was ok
I said it was over
He just went away.


You're so funny! I loved this one!!!!! Sounds like my marriage in the final throes of dispassion....

~one voice~
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2 posted 08-06-99 10:44 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh Balladeer... what are we going to do with you? hehehe

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


elvira
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3 posted 08-06-99 11:25 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

and in reply she said to him: the next time you need a "friend"...dont' call me, just use your hand
Lucie
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4 posted 08-07-99 12:20 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Such deep felt meaning behind these words...hehehe
redwriter1
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5 posted 08-07-99 12:58 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

ok.. I'm taking away your beer now!!
hahahhaa

what the heck is that??.....

you crazy guy.. (ok i thought it was funny).. but I'll never admit it...

hahahahha
hahahha
hhahahah
(ooopsssyy)
thursdayschild
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6 posted 08-07-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Great poem! You know, this kind of thing always happens when you dare to go swimming
in the winter. He'll jump right in (a macho
thing) while she, (the smarter of the two)
stands at the side looking at the cold water,
thinking "no way". (staying dry)
Just my interpretation
(not avowing it's the correct one)
Cinderella
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7 posted 08-07-99 03:16 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

I would rather do without than a quickie! I once enjoyed an extended time with a man, which is so much better! But I agree, have another beer "deer".
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8 posted 08-07-99 04:14 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

If you keep making me laugh like this I'm going to pop one of my stitches.. I loved it.. Now that was so short it reminded me of one of my ex's.. hehehehehe
No love there huh?


Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Toerag
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9 posted 08-07-99 08:14 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno?...Old LongJohn's gonna really get tired of us writing about him all the time.......I remember the last time he was telling me about slipping six inches to his sweet wife....it was on his honeymoon if I recall...of course, he had to do it three times to give her six.....He's a real Casanova yanno?....Puts on some of that Tommy Hilfiger underwear, a little after shave (Catch of the Day's his favorite), and he's fit for a queen!....Of course yanno, old Casanova wasn't the greatest lover anyhow.....it was that other fella...."Came-alot?"
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10 posted 08-07-99 08:40 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL!!! A toast to Balladeer!!! But how DO you know LJA so well??? LOL... Oh...that's right... the diner kiss! *G* Guess he told ALL his secrets! *G*
LngJhnAg
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11 posted 08-07-99 09:21 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

'Deer

Don't be discouraged by all these critics. They lack the sensitivity to understand that even you have problems. The next time she catches you wearing her gown during the Boy's Night poker party, just fold instead of standing pat or laying down your hand. As for shuffling the cards.. yannow, if you don't bend them back so far and treat them so rough, they'll last a lot longer.
Nan
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12 posted 08-07-99 09:56 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

All right!! That's it!!!
This place is out of control!!!!!
Goin' down for the third time here.....

LngJhnAg
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13 posted 08-07-99 10:00 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

er, Nan?

Ynno, this probably isn't the right forum for talking about going down.... heh heh heh
Toerag
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14 posted 08-07-99 10:04 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

That's right Nan...this is not the proper forum as LongJohn said,...now then,,I happen to have a little forum right here in my office, (not the oval office by the way), and I don't even smoke cigars?...So, ya wanna make some rhythm?......
 
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