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azblond
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The Steamy Desert


0 posted 08-06-99 09:18 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond



I want you to love me with passion.
I want to feel my heart race again from your touch,
Loose my breath from your kiss,
Drown in the depths of your eyes
Smoldering with love and desire.
I want to lie in your arms,
Feel your heart beat,
Listen to the sound of you breathing as you touch me gently.
I want to know all your souls secrets, all your fears.
I want to know your hopes and dreams,
Your fondest memories, your wildest desires.
I want to be your lover and your best friend,
Your strength when you are weak,
Your support when you are strong.
I want to love you through the good and the bad.
I want to walk on beaches hand in hand with you,
And watch the sun set over the mountains in the desert.
I want to travel lifes roads with you at my side.
I want to age with you,
And wake up some day years and years away to you,
Lying by my side,
And whisper in your ear…
“I want you to love me with passion…”


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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 08-07-99 03:16 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

blondie, baby..... I can relate to this so well, as you already may know... wonderful piece, my friend....wonderful..

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Cinderella
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2 posted 08-07-99 03:59 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

"Smoldering with love and desire" - How did you know how I feel?
azblond
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The Steamy Desert


3 posted 08-07-99 10:49 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Thank you both for the comments...as I said in Learning to Love...I am new at free verse, (me the rhyming queen!), and any comments are so appreciated. I'm glad someone liked this!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

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4 posted 08-22-99 04:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wow, I am just about breathless. There is a LOT of passion and feeling in this poem and it is well written. I can really relate to this!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 08-22-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, stunning. So much pure emotion. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

pen of passion
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6 posted 08-22-99 09:59 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

A passionate piece of work my friend.
jfreak
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7 posted 08-23-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Well Blondy gal,

I must say, that I can only hope to find a women that would feel the same about me. This is an outstanding poem and I commend you. Keep up the outstanding work. You know how I love your stuff.

JFreak
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 08-23-99 09:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOw...I think we all want that, or at least I know I do

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
traveler
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9 posted 08-24-99 03:34 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

yes ... these feelings, oh so familiar ...smile ... so beautifully said ... I hope my love thinks of me when she reads it ...as i think of her ... thank you
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


10 posted 08-24-99 06:33 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This was wonderful ... your passion comes through strongly, but it is tempered by something slow-burning and long-lasting ... what a lovely poem and a lovely feeling.

I think I will go and write a poem for my love now ...

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Dark Angel
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11 posted 08-24-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh such Passion, I too am breathless
beautiful work :-)
azblond
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The Steamy Desert


12 posted 08-24-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Ah, The wonderful response. I am truly flattered. After reading the reply's I thought I would give a bit of background, I am not one to usually write in free verse, but I wrote these words a few years back for a man I was had fallen in love with to portray how deeply my feelings for him had began to run. I wanted to portray all that I wanted to share, what a real relationship meant to me, how much we would be a part of one another's lives. I hoped he would see that my feelings were not just for the heat of the moment, but for a lifetime, and that though our lives had once been seperate, I now wanted them to intertwine. I think it worked, we've been married almost two years now, and I still feel this is our mantra of sorts. I often fall asleep whispering the words "I want you to love me with passion" in his ears, and he always knows how those words signify all we share.

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

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