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Seagulls |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Can you see where this one is going to? If not, read on. Seagulls Walking on the strand Sky an azure blue Waves gently roll No one else in view Gulls careen and call Soaring on wingtips I toss up to them Crumbled cracker bits Floating on the wind I gaze into the sky One repays gratitude Crapping in my eye Alicat ------------------ Le Jongleur Aspirante |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Although that story is quite sad, How that bird fixed your wagon, Think how bad it might have been If it had been a dragon!  That ain't enough to ease your mind? Perhaps this little fact will Make you feel lucky that It weren't no teradactyl! |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
You get just what you deserve.. hehehe.. Now if it were a dragon would you have crap on your whole body? I don't think that I want to think about that anymore.. Thatnks for this interesting piece.. Now I'll have to keep looking skyward, but not for too long.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Darquewing Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 20 |
Seagull doody, Dragon doody. Being mad is quite insane. Now wouldn't you be sad, If what hit you was a plane? I thought this poem was very funny. I enjoy the lighter side of poetry very much, especially irony. You have made my day very bright, though still darque. Thank you, Alicat! ------------------ KEEP THE DARQUENESS ALIVE! Darquewing |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tis a slice o life poem from alicat poinant poinant poinant |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Not sure what to say. Not sure what to do. How does one reply To a poem 'bout bird poo? LOL....Ali, I just love your poems. Honestly.  |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Tis true Dragons Fly But in flight Poo? Oh! we never do! Cute poem! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
so I'm not the only one...those ingrates! [This message has been edited by thursdayschild (edited 08-07-99).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Ok I must admit it I can't help but reply. but lets be realistic.. a dragon in the sky? I'd pic something earthly I'm glad COWS don't fly!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You know for some people those birds will sing. Sy |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ali Next time - don't shortchange the gulls with crummy bits of crackers - give them something they really use in their craw - like a firecracker or cherry bomb. lol I liked your twist at the end |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Hehehe...thanks all...guess it's a good thing I didn't feed them gulls any Alka-Seltzer. Alicat |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
just glad i don't live that close to the coast...though those seagulls do come and visit here at times...guess i had better watch out  |
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