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True Damn Love!

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Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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Ala bam a


0 posted 08-06-99 04:36 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Come to me
Do not hesitate
I am not funky

Please be mine
Let our hearts entwingle
Like honeysucker

Jump around me
Scuff my boots
Fingerpoke at me

Skippy-TOE by
with owl growls
And Fa-la-la's

Love me with
All your grits
As I love you
© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 08-06-99 04:43 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

What passion, what presentation, what purty verses! LOL. My heart beats pitty-pat... my grits are yours! *G*
Lucie
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since 06-20-99
Posts 1123
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2 posted 08-06-99 04:53 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Toerag I have a question??? Is your family tree a straight line??? hahahhaha
Toerag
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since 07-29-99
Posts 5839
Ala bam a


3 posted 08-06-99 05:08 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Naww.....it has limbs...really....but I'm just the sap.....
redwriter1
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since 07-22-99
Posts 476
Franklin, TN


4 posted 08-06-99 10:23 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

this is the worst piece of "writing" i've ever read.. hahah.. sorry.. but I try to be honest... (geesshh)...

(i think this is a test to see if we tell the truth here).. I for one.. DO..

(smile)
Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


5 posted 08-06-99 10:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

What a silver-tongued devil you are! This is a poem of the first grade!
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
Posts 887
Ohio


6 posted 08-07-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

rokey dokey....LOL That's 'bout all I gots ta say 'bout that.
thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
Posts 174
Houston, Tx.


7 posted 08-07-99 02:33 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

you have a way AROUND words! this is too
cute...loved it!
Christopher
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since 08-02-99
Posts 9130
Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 08-07-99 02:42 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I'm not sure they really WERE words
But I must admit to it having caught my eye and made me think,
made me wonder,
what kind of spell,
this Toerag's under...

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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars.
-Unknown-
So let the sun beat down upon my face,
It's warmth will dry my tears.
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


9 posted 08-07-99 09:31 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tippy toes and
Nose to nose
So the garden grows.
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


10 posted 08-07-99 09:37 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Toe, old friend... you have a lot of nerve, or not a nerve. That was one piece of really ugly writing... I'm still lmao at the sheer audacity you had to write something this bad. Knowing you, I'll bet your skinned crawled with every line you wrote. great job.
 
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