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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 1999-08-06 03:07 PM


The last time we fought,
You were down on your knees.
I refused to give in
To your insistent pleas.

You crawled ever closer,
I pulled back instead.
I'd not satisfy you,
Or heed what you said.

You lifted you hands,
You beckoned me near.
Your requests that I yield,
Fell on my deaf ears.

I retained my position,
I refused your demand,
To crawl from under our bed,
And fight like a man.

© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
blueloon
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1 posted 1999-08-06 03:10 PM


It is nice to know others fight in a simular style. Nice work as always.
blueloon

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 1999-08-06 03:15 PM


thanks, Blue - that's my favorite karate style... the Dust Bunny form. Float like a dust bunny, sting like dust mop.
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Louisiana
3 posted 1999-08-06 03:23 PM


Watch out, LJA... she'll get the vacuum cleaner after you! LOL.
Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 1999-08-06 03:24 PM


LOL......that was another classic my friend.......
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
5 posted 1999-08-06 03:36 PM


Belle

ROFL@vacuum cleaner. That's what got that fight started. She just doesn't understand that I'm alergic to vacuuming.

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