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....Falling On Deaf Ears....

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Mark R.
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since 06-25-99
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0 posted 08-06-99 12:34 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark R.


Memories from a distant past,
Thoughts of a love that would not last.
Living a lie from long ago,
Seeds of sorrow, I could only sow.

Am I destined for such a fate?
So much anger, so much hate.

I can no longer bear this weight upon my shoulders,
My heart, my soul, my touch, now so much colder.

I search for the light of my soul,
The blood in my heart I await to reflow.
I need the hope I once had, again,
For deeper into despair I do descend.

"Find me, find me....Dear friend!"
An angel I wish you to send.
Your shoulder to cry on, please lend,
For my heart I can no longer fend.
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Clmbb
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since 07-23-99
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1 posted 08-06-99 09:42 PM       View Profile for Clmbb   Email Clmbb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Clmbb's Home Page   View IP for Clmbb

I feel as if I am in the same space as you...this touched me and I know from where you write
Keep writing
thursdayschild
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2 posted 08-07-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

sorrowful plea...hopefully not falling on
deaf ears. Great work, can truly feel the ache of love lost...
Mark R.
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3 posted 08-10-99 08:29 AM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.

Thank you, everyone. I realize that it's hard to understand, at times, where someone is coming from in their writing. However, it's our emotions that keep us in tune with each other. Thanks again for your continued support...

[This message has been edited by Mark R. (edited 08-10-99).]
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 08-10-99 03:28 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I love reading your work, another good one here - very emotional...Hope you've found that angel to lean on ...if not, I'll be her... Keep writing!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Delores Hall
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5 posted 08-11-99 12:48 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

This was a really nice poem.I enjoyed it.
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