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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


0 posted 08-06-99 10:20 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

I dont deserve
To be pushed aside
I know you heard
My anguished cries
And youd spare me
If you could
Your kind heart
Would share only good
But theres no protection
To be had
My love is yours
Through joy and bad
Id have loved you
Through eternity
If youd never
Noticed me.
© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 08-06-99 12:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

It's the unknown thing that is often the most precious.
Toerag
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2 posted 08-06-99 02:19 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

But it's so easy to notice you...you were noticed long before you were seen yanno.....
suthern
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3 posted 08-06-99 02:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Likewise, sweet Toe!!! Thanks and smooches!
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-06-99 02:55 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

hmmm, Belle

This poem made me think at first that you were heart broken. Then, I read it again and thought you were lovestruck. After another reading, I think you are in love in vain. Yanno, this is a PERFECT female poem. I'm am totally confused, but every woman in here knows exactly what you are saying. I love the way you put it together.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 08-06-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderfully written suthern....very well spoken.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 08-06-99 08:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern

Any man that failed to notice your beautiful, inside and outside, have a heart of pure gold and a mind like quick silver, well, he must be blind, dumb and plain stupid, but hey, we all know men are like that, don't we.. and us women are the superior beings...ooops

...sorry folks, only kidding about the latter...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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7 posted 08-06-99 08:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Suthern, I can't imagine anyone pushing you aside.....unless it was to save you from the safe Long John pushed out of the 10th story window!

A very good poem and it would be a lucky fellow indeed to have those thoughts from you headed in his direction.
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8 posted 01-05-2005 12:42 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

I've almost left PIP, you know.....too much hurt in the place these days.... but it may be a good alternative to just come here, read the people I care about, before I ever arrived.

The more I thnk about it, the better that sounds. The past...a nice place to be.

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