»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #1
»
Notice
| Open Poetry #1 |
|
Notice |
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
|
I don’t deserve To be pushed aside I know you heard My anguished cries And you’d spare me If you could Your kind heart Would share only good But there’s no protection To be had My love is yours Through joy and bad I’d have loved you Through eternity If you’d never Noticed me. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
It's the unknown thing that is often the most precious. |
||
|
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But it's so easy to notice you...you were noticed long before you were seen yanno..... |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Likewise, sweet Toe!!! Thanks and smooches! |
||
|
LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
hmmm, Belle This poem made me think at first that you were heart broken. Then, I read it again and thought you were lovestruck. After another reading, I think you are in love in vain. Yanno, this is a PERFECT female poem. I'm am totally confused, but every woman in here knows exactly what you are saying. I love the way you put it together. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written suthern....very well spoken. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
||
|
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern Any man that failed to notice your beautiful, inside and outside, have a heart of pure gold and a mind like quick silver, well, he must be blind, dumb and plain stupid, but hey, we all know men are like that, don't we.. ...sorry folks, only kidding about the latter... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Suthern, I can't imagine anyone pushing you aside.....unless it was to save you from the safe Long John pushed out of the 10th story window! A very good poem and it would be a lucky fellow indeed to have those thoughts from you headed in his direction. |
||
|
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've almost left PIP, you know.....too much hurt in the place these days.... but it may be a good alternative to just come here, read the people I care about, before I ever arrived. The more I thnk about it, the better that sounds. The past...a nice place to be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
