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Sue
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0 posted 1999-08-06 08:09 AM


This one's just for fun....

Mouse was quiet, as mice are
Cat was quieter still
Quieter by far

Mouse was speedy, as mice are
Cat was speedier still
Speedier by far

Mouse was hungry, as mice are
Cat was hungrier still
Hungrier by far

Mouse is tasty, as mice are
Cat will eat his fill
That's how cats are

© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-08-06 09:02 AM


Poor little mouse
he had no chance
against a hungry cat.
His little hole
to far away
so under a chair he sat.
Then came the cat
with a swish of his paw
he sent him into
flight like a bat.
He smacked his head
upon the wall
from there he became
the cats ball.



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-08-06 09:09 AM


I liked this, it was cute

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sue
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3 posted 1999-08-06 09:16 AM


Thanks, both of you. It's nice having someone read my stuff.
Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 1999-08-06 10:19 AM


Sue.....I liked this sweets.....well done!
Sue
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5 posted 1999-08-06 10:34 AM


You're too kind, cuddles.
Nan
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6 posted 1999-08-06 11:49 AM


Lovin' it!!!



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-08-06 12:09 PM


Cute poem good for a laugh.
suthern
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8 posted 1999-08-06 12:11 PM


Sue: I like this! *G*
Andrew Scott
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9 posted 1999-08-06 01:25 PM


The mouse placed his order for a plate of cheese, but the maitre de had four furry knees. And instead of getting served his cheesy fill, mouse found himself being served a feline's meal.
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