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JohnDoe82
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0 posted 08-05-99 10:57 PM       View Profile for JohnDoe82   Email JohnDoe82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JohnDoe82

Unconditional Love

The skies above are strange and great,
Her wonders I can see,
For when it's dark her stars shine down,
And glad my soul can be.

Her sun brings warmth to all the land,
And warms my heart as well,
Her moon, while cold, doth bring me light,
And leads me from my hell.

Her clouds bring shade unto my back,
Her rain, it fills the seas,
Her snow is soft and gently falls,
And puts my mind at ease.

Too much of one can bring me death,
Too few, my fate's the same,
I can't control the skies above,
Or learn to play its game.

Control is gone, but hope is not,
I must accept her will,
For if I weather this strong storm,
I'll learn to love her still.

[This message has been edited by JohnDoe82 (edited 08-06-99).]
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-06-99 02:32 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful.

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angel girl
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within a whisper...


2 posted 08-06-99 03:59 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

very nice. i loved the way you described things. it was simple, yet elegant and powerful.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 08-06-99 09:36 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful!!! What about....Her Wonders???
JohnDoe82
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4 posted 08-06-99 05:33 PM       View Profile for JohnDoe82   Email JohnDoe82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JohnDoe82

The Title "Unconditional Love" has been suggested and I think I'm going to go with it.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 08-06-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Beautiful, you are very good. Welcome, glad you came to join us.
Andrew Scott
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6 posted 08-06-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Another fine submission. Something that we are all subject to.
Moonlight
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7 posted 08-06-99 06:37 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

a true appreciation for nature! beautiful poem
 
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