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JohnDoe82
Junior Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 42
MO, USA

0 posted 1999-08-05 10:57 PM

Unconditional Love

The skies above are strange and great,
Her wonders I can see,
For when it's dark her stars shine down,
And glad my soul can be.

Her sun brings warmth to all the land,
And warms my heart as well,
Her moon, while cold, doth bring me light,
And leads me from my hell.

Her clouds bring shade unto my back,
Her rain, it fills the seas,
Her snow is soft and gently falls,
And puts my mind at ease.

Too much of one can bring me death,
Too few, my fate's the same,
I can't control the skies above,
Or learn to play its game.

Control is gone, but hope is not,
I must accept her will,
For if I weather this strong storm,
I'll learn to love her still.

[This message has been edited by JohnDoe82 (edited 08-06-99).]

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-08-06 02:32 AM

Very beautiful.

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"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

2 posted 1999-08-06 03:59 AM

very nice. i loved the way you described things. it was simple, yet elegant and powerful.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-08-06 09:36 AM

Beautiful!!! What about....Her Wonders???

JohnDoe82
Junior Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 42
MO, USA

4 posted 1999-08-06 05:33 PM

The Title "Unconditional Love" has been suggested and I think I'm going to go with it.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 1999-08-06 05:37 PM

Beautiful, you are very good. Welcome, glad you came to join us.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 1999-08-06 06:27 PM

Another fine submission. Something that we are all subject to.

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

7 posted 1999-08-06 06:37 PM

a true appreciation for nature! beautiful poem

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