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la hac' awwni
Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44
Euless, Tx, 76039

0 posted 1999-08-05 08:58 PM


Blinded by the Light
You are the Power
that I write of.
Days gone by and Days
yet to arrive,
let My Love be strong
and Alive!
I write of a Maiden
fair and pure
Strong of word, Sweet of
Laughter,
passion stronger still
overflowing
Desire unrefined!
Sword in hand, unquenched
devoured my heart
your secret poison flowed.
I fell
under your spell.
You spoke, I wrote
unendingly
of my desire
for you.
Denied
but now writing
dreams
moved by emotions I
cannot erase.
Crowning Glory of my Days
Devine Enchanter of the
Night Realm.
Low Lights, sparkle in your eyes
mischief in Thy Heart
always.
Tell me My Love,
if my fancy took flight, would you
be there to recieve
of flowers-gardens are there
and
bounty for Thee.
Books of Love-My Heart's Love
overflowing its course.
With a Kiss of Greeting, a hug or two
for good measure
to gaze with unfettered
eye
upon your unconqueroredform.
Aye,
if I could fly....




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thursdayschild
Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-08-06 12:01 PM


Completely lovely poem...full of passion.
Thanks for sharing it!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-08-10 04:02 PM


...aaaahhhh....beautiful piece...you have an interesting way of carrying the reader along with your words...very nice.

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


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