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May I?

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unknown
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Momma, I did what you told me too
but it's not working out the way
you said it would
things aren't what they seem
not like you said they would be

I know you tried to tell me
don't fall in love
and I know you tried to teach me
how to be tough

But momma, I think I've fallen in love
Momma, this thing you warned me of
I'ts not working out
the way you said it would
things aren't what they seem
not like you said they would be

I know you tried to tell me
don't fall in love
and I know you tried to teach me
how to be tough

But momma,, tell me what do I do?
Momma, I tried to be like you
and it's not working out the way
you said it would
things aren't what they seem
not like you said they would be

Momma?.. I think I'm falling in love...
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hoot_owl_rn
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I kind of like this one....different

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Kelly
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2 posted 08-06-99 02:14 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I love it. It's like a song. Love isn't always the way we think it should be. Sometimes it's better than we expected.
 
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