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mia
Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-08-05 06:17 PM


Mirrored reflexions
at corner stones
the pathes cross
here and forever
it is so simple
endless sex of the mind
under countless hours
joy for this moment
until the next
to feel my love
and to feel my pain
it is so simple
mearly a piece
of what endures

© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-08-05 07:20 PM


Mia....I really like the flow of this one

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Alain DeLaCendres
Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119
Ohio
2 posted 1999-08-05 10:49 PM


Aaahh..très belle, as always dear mia.
It's been to long since I last saw you mia..I've been spending too much time over in Critical Analysis and Passions in Prose I guess...This was a nice breath of fresh air, I'll be eagerly waiting more.

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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.

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