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Chumani Mist
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since 1999-08-05
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Apache Junction,Az. usa

0 posted 1999-08-05 05:37 PM


A rainbow is quite beautiful so Brilliant in the sky.
But have you ever studied it?
or stopped to wonder why?
Why is a rainbow so stunning?
what makes it so sublime? why does it take our breath away? not once, but every time?
Is it the yellow in its arch? or maybe it's the blue.
Is it the pink or lavender? or any other hue?
Though yellow's nice and so is pink and blue is pretty too,
I can't imagine a rainbow one-colored through and through.
Just picture an all-pink rainbow,How boring that would be!
It'd have no life, no interest,
No personality.
A rainbow is magnificent because of every hue.
Each color brings its own beauty, creating something new.
And what a creation it is!
So beautiful to see!
We can all learn from the rainbow
And live in unity....

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Tina

© Copyright 1999 Chumani Mist - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 1999-08-05 06:14 PM


Most Excellent! I thought about writing a poem about a rainbow, but yours will do just fine. Great message there too. Thanks for sharing this pot of gold and welcome to the neighborhood.
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-08-05 06:15 PM




Uh Huh, just last week. And someone I invited to look in that direction only saw dark clouds. What a pitty.

Very nice thought.

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 1999-08-05 08:20 PM



Makes sense to me..



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-05-99).]

Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
USA
4 posted 1999-08-05 11:15 PM


Positively Beautiful!!( Rainbows & The poem )

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*


angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
5 posted 1999-08-06 05:46 AM


Wow, i loved the colors you painted.

Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
6 posted 1999-08-06 08:48 AM


I seriously love this poem, it really says something, and says it beautifully.
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