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INclan
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0 posted 08-05-99 10:23 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for INclan

First rays on a glassed lake
rising mists
a distant mournful loon

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Lil-bit
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1 posted 08-05-99 01:45 PM       View Profile for Lil-bit   Email Lil-bit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil-bit

Sounds like someone wants to go fishing or camping!

You will soon. Hunting season approaches for the great hunter.

hoot_owl_rn
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Very beautiful Inclan...but isn't Haiku 7/5/7??

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INclan
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3 posted 08-06-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Thank you hoot_owl_rn and lil-bit. It is a snapshot off the dock at a cabin we stay at while fishing in August. Yes, that trip is coming up soon!

Hoot_owl_rn, I have not heard of such a rigid structure for haiku...I will have to check around a little.
kaile
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4 posted 07-13-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

WOW

this is in MHO the best haiku i have read from you so far...simply beautiful
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5 posted 02-11-2002 04:42 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

it's supposed to be 5,7,5 I believe.
I like the thoughts in this one
 
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