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how will you feel...

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ac
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0 posted 08-05-99 08:24 AM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ac

I will survive,
You know I will,
I'll learn to live without you here…

Despite the pain you've caused in me,
I will move on,
Completely...

I know I'll make it on my own,
With you I've always been alone...

I don't need you by my side,
When all you've done is hurt my pride...

I'm strong,
I know I'll carry on…
Even after you are gone…

However, you should think
of an appeal…
Cuz, without me here,
How will you feel ? …


[This message has been edited by ac (edited 08-05-99).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-05-99 09:22 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I liked this! Nice work!
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2 posted 08-05-99 01:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nice work, ac. You know, if the person being left would just say,"I'll be fine. How about you?" it might rattle a few cages and turn some tables.
ac
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3 posted 08-05-99 01:59 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Thank you DeVine, your response means a lot to me ...and Balladeer, yes you're right...if only more us would recognize that despite the pain we'll be ok...it's those who've left who won't be the same...
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 08-05-99 02:24 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Chances are she never did feel and never will, if you know what I mean. Well done AC.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely done...like the way this one reads.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
ac
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6 posted 08-06-99 01:00 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Thanks hoot_owl_rn and Andrew...i think you have a point there...he probably never did...
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