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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-05-99 02:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Its been way to long my love
I wonder, will we ever see each again
At night I watch the stars above
And think about you special friend
I wonder what you are doing How youíre feeling
If you still love me
My senses reeling
but , I know
Iíll always be with you
You have set into my heart
And there youíll be forever
And although we are apart
Iíll forget you Ė never






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Dark Angel
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1 posted 08-24-99 09:27 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

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Colin
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2 posted 08-24-99 11:56 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

I know the feeling well, and I sympathize.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 08-24-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Nicely done with a bittersweet feel..beautifully written. Great work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


Dark Angel
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4 posted 08-25-99 03:07 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Eric and Alwye .. thank you for your lovely comments
miriam
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5 posted 08-26-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

my boyfreind is off in the army and your poems are really holding me up. I want to share a quote that my boyfriend and i love so much. "If love was a dove, set it free, if it comes back it was meant to be. If it doesn't, then it was never yours to begin with." I don't know the author.
Dark Angel
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6 posted 08-26-99 04:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Miriam,I am flattered to know that my poems are holding you up :-) Yes.. the quote I have heard of it and used it before, it certainly rings true, doesn't it?
Thanks again :-)
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 08-26-99 05:01 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Dark Angel

Nice variance on the lines, and the message was crafted very well. I enjoyed it.

Miriam - that quote goes at least back to the 60's, and probably a lot farther than that. A variance is,
"If love was a dove, set it free. If it comes back it was meant to be. If it doesn't, then hunt it down and kill it."
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8 posted 08-29-99 04:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

thanks LngJhnAg, for your comment. ( hehehe hunt it down and kill it)Kewl!
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