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Masked Intruder
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0 posted 1999-08-05 01:53 AM


I am happy,
Happy to hear a voice,
A voice I heard not long ago.
But I am happy, nonetheless,
To hear it again.

I am happy,
Happy to see a face,
A face I saw not long ago.
But I am happy, nonetheless,
To see it again.

I am sad,
Sad because that face,
That voice,
Are so far from me,
So very far.

I yearn to hear that voice,
To see that face
Again.
Just once more
Until never enough
Is still not complete.
Just once more...


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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?

© Copyright 1999 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
Darquewing
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1 posted 1999-08-05 02:21 AM


It truely does tell a good story... I know this one by heart.. Excellent work..

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KEEP THE DARQUENESS ALIVE!
Darquewing

Nan
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2 posted 1999-08-05 08:15 AM


Sweet and Simple, MI - nice job, indeed...
elvira
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3 posted 1999-08-05 01:58 PM


a lovely, yearning poem

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim
...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving...
Master...chat?...apart...plain...hush...then...vice...shameless self promotion


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4 posted 1999-08-05 02:05 PM


The simplest emotions are the strongest. This poem is simple......and strong.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-05-99).]

Toerag
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5 posted 1999-08-05 02:47 PM


That really was a nice piece of work,,,(especially from a wrestler)
Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 1999-08-05 02:48 PM


Here I am making fun of your name.....and mine's Toerag?....
Masked Intruder
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7 posted 1999-08-05 04:15 PM


Wrestler?! LMAO! Shyeah right...try football player, you appendage wiper! *Grins*

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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?

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