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share with me my dreams...i will forever love you....

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amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


0 posted 08-05-99 12:37 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

can you see the confusion,
draped across my face,
knowing that now you fill,
such an empty space.

deep inside i cringe,
with every word you say,
it good to know ive loved before,
and can love agian someday.

tears well up in my eyes,
because i know your my forever,
and i ask you in the future,
can you honestly see us together.

you tell me your not sure,
and my soul falls apart,
but i hide it with a smile,
just as i have from the start.

the conversations over,
but to many questions left unasked,
is it safe to fall in love,
or will i become your past.

you tell me that im beautiful,
but it can never match the sound,
of you telling me you love me,
and youll always be around.

i know soon our worlds will change,
and who will i be then,
your companion, your lover,
or just another mislead friend.

no longer can i keep you,
safe beneath my wings,
only trust you love me,
and will take part in my dreams.

of you and me together,
long after our "i do's"
knowing that you love me,
because i will forever love you.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 06-23-99
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1 posted 08-05-99 12:41 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh, I have felt this way! Very well written.

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*
amber
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Posts 246
los banos, ca,


2 posted 08-05-99 12:49 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you so much for your comment, it good to know im not the only one who gets confused, when it comes to falling in love, that is if im not just fooling myself!
 
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