The Silent Pain of Aloness

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Open Poetry #1

The Silent Pain of Aloness

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-08-04 11:13 PM

Locked up in my shadowy room.
Lying in the silence of darkness.
On a warm summer's night.
Feeling the cold chills of loneliness
run up my spine.
My heart aches with pain of aloness.
The tears of rejection slowly run down my checks.
While thinking of how it feels to be pushed aside.
Feeling afraid to talk my mind,
because someone might be listening,
and be critical with reject.
As I lye I think of what it would be like,
to be like for who I am.
But knowing I never will,
because of the fact that no one cares to know me.
Having all these feelings locked away,
because their's no one to tell them to.
Feeling like exploding,
but all I can do is scream the tears out,
and cry myself to sleep.
With only the warmth of the sheets.
Never knowing any other warmth.
Just a cold shoulder,
and being brushed away.

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©Misty

Please read and tell me what you think!

[This message has been edited by Misty (edited 08-05-99).]

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

1 posted 1999-08-05 08:29 PM

PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS POEM, I would like to know if it's any good

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©Misty

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

2 posted 1999-08-06 08:49 AM

I FEEL THAT WAY MANY NIGHTS. THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF WAS VERY GOOD.

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

3 posted 1999-08-06 09:30 PM

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