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The Silent Pain of Aloness

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Misty
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0 posted 08-04-99 11:13 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

Locked up in my shadowy room.
Lying in the silence of darkness.
On a warm summer's night.
Feeling the cold chills of loneliness
run up my spine.
My heart aches with pain of aloness.
The tears of rejection slowly run down my checks.
While thinking of how it feels to be pushed aside.
Feeling afraid to talk my mind,
because someone might be listening,
and be critical with reject.
As I lye I think of what it would be like,
to be like for who I am.
But knowing I never will,
because of the fact that no one cares to know me.
Having all these feelings locked away,
because their's no one to tell them to.
Feeling like exploding,
but all I can do is scream the tears out,
and cry myself to sleep.
With only the warmth of the sheets.
Never knowing any other warmth.
Just a cold shoulder,
and being brushed away.

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İMisty


Please read and tell me what you think!

[This message has been edited by Misty (edited 08-05-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Misty - All Rights Reserved
Misty
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since 08-01-99
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1 posted 08-05-99 08:29 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS POEM, I would like to know if it's any good

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İMisty
angel girl
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2 posted 08-06-99 08:49 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

I FEEL THAT WAY MANY NIGHTS. THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF WAS VERY GOOD.
Misty
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3 posted 08-06-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for Misty   Email Misty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Misty's Home Page   View IP for Misty

Thanks for the reply! Atleast someone liked it!

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İMisty
 
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