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My First Lover

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Cinderella
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0 posted 08-04-99 09:01 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cinderella

Passing by your house the other day
If I saw you, what would I say?
My heart was beating, oh so strong
You, only you, can tell me if I was wrong.

Giving you my all felt so right
It truly was a memorable night.
Why don't you call, have you no feeling
That time together still has me wheeling.

To waken every morning and think of you -
Was this your way what two bodies could do?
Or perhaps your chance to become satisfied
My insides felt maybe you were unsatisfied.

Wanting to know will help me understand
If I was a poor lover or if I was grand.
Oh, well, no answer will ne'er you tell
Sever the idea if I said go to Hell.

Was your attraction to me a mutual thing?
If so, thank you for making my heart bring
Thumping and pumping like never before
There will always be for you an open door!

Too serious, I apologize for writing this,
Had to tell you that I received great bliss.
Remembering this time until the day I die,
So my wonderful lover I will say goodbye!


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Balladeer
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1 posted 08-04-99 09:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Cinderella, if your sincerity in love-making matches your sincerity in this poem I have no doubt the lucky fella was satisfied. Words well written.
Cinderella
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2 posted 08-05-99 02:45 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Balla"deer" so nice was your comment!
Sally S.
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3 posted 08-05-99 08:33 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I know there was a couple lines in there that I'd have LOVED to say....yep. Well done, Cinderella.
Cinderella
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4 posted 08-05-99 05:05 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Thanks Sally !
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