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Where do you go when you are dead?

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Psycodillica
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0 posted 08-04-99 06:09 PM       View Profile for Psycodillica   Email Psycodillica   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Psycodillica

Where do you go when you are dead?
Can any one tell me positivily?
You never know where you'll go way up high or down real low.
Once your down can you pick yourself up again?
Once your up is there a chance you could fall and lose it all?
Where do you go when you are dead?
If there is a Heaven and Hell which direction will you go?
How can you know?
Heaven is it really perfect?
And if so wont you still miss all that you left behind?
I will cry no matter which direction I may head.
Where do you go when you are dead?
Up, down, or some where stuck inbetween?
If there reall are these places to go which direction will I flow?
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WhtDove
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1 posted 08-04-99 06:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Good job! When you die your soul returns to God who gave it. You return to Heaven and await the judgement. You can read of it in Luke 16:1-22 One was good the other not, they were seperated in heaven. The rich man on the other side of the gulf could see Abraham, and the rich man as all of us await judgement. Though judgement can also be reward.
Andrew Scott
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Ah... such a big, big question with so many possible answers. Heaven or Hell for some, recycled or oblivion for others. And the list goes on... Wish I new and glad I don't. Just do your best while you're here and go from there.
Psycodillica
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Thank you both for your reply..
Those questions in the poem are ones better left unawsered.
Sometimes gods gratest gift is unanwsered prayers
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