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Chalice of Blood ( Geez! Who would of thought I could have written such a dark poem..

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Cobra
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0 posted 08-04-99 05:55 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Her fragile body sits in the shadows,
she awaits her lover; dark creature of night.
A young girl's innocence lost in his eyes,
she craves and longs for his painful bite.

He rises from his velvet coffin,
he thrives on the shadows of fear.
He cast a wicked, tempting grin,
and flies to take her life so dear.

As she whimpers and crawls to her bed,
she asks of the lord a request.
She asks to be tortured in the chambers of hell,
as her cold, black heart pounds in her chest.

Her life has been a living hell,
when she dies, she'll be right back at home.
Kept in a cell, the dark ones will dwell,
and she'll become one as well.

Her devil with a handsome face,
has come to drink her life.
He walks towards her pathetic being,
in his hands, a razor-sharp knife.

One quick slit and her red blood flows,
he places her in sinking mud.
He smiles as demons take her soul,
and sips from his chalice of blood.



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Cammie
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Mystic
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1 posted 08-04-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for Mystic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic

Cammie! This poem was sooo dark! Very in-depth..
Cobra
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2 posted 08-04-99 05:59 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thanks Sunshine!
I don't really like dark poems, but I wrote it. So there!
Psycodillica
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3 posted 08-04-99 06:02 PM       View Profile for Psycodillica   Email Psycodillica   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Psycodillica

That was really good. I have often felt like that girl. Gladly I am not
Cobra
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4 posted 08-04-99 06:08 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Exactly why I wrote this poem! Sometimes we all feel like we're on the verge of suicide. True? Well, this was about a girl who was badly mistreaten. So in response, she subjected herself to the power of evil! I hope no one ever tries to attempt that. Be happy! Thanks Psycodillica! And hi!
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 08-04-99 06:14 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Yes in deed, a very dark subject. Well written Cobra.
Cobra
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6 posted 08-04-99 06:26 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thanks Andrew! I thought it was well written too...
Magic Bunny
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7 posted 08-04-99 06:47 PM       View Profile for Magic Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magic Bunny

Very Dark... I like it!
Cobra
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8 posted 08-04-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thanks bunches Bunny! Yes, it was VERY dark...
Balladeer
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9 posted 08-04-99 07:03 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Isn't it interesting all the different avenues that lie within our minds? You brought one out in a very interesting, and well written, manner. What else lurks up there?
Cobra
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10 posted 08-04-99 07:14 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Honestly Balladeer, I really don't know what lurks in my mind. Somehow I've managed to venture into some dark, unknown territory.
But, a million thanks for your kind reply...
Interlude
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11 posted 08-05-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for Interlude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interlude

Devilishly clever Cammie...
Cobra
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12 posted 08-05-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thanks Interlude! Glad ya think so.
DreamEvil
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13 posted 08-05-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Heavenly slice of Darkness, my dear.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Cobra
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14 posted 08-05-99 02:01 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Why, thank you DreamEvil
By the way, I enjoy your poetry a lot.
Candy Rain
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15 posted 08-05-99 11:55 PM       View Profile for Candy Rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Candy Rain

This was such a creative gothic-like poem.
Good Job.
Princess Lily
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16 posted 08-06-99 12:00 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Very dark yet very descriptive.I like it~Lily

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Alwye
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17 posted 08-06-99 12:15 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderfully chilling...I enjoyed it.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
angel girl
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within a whisper...


18 posted 08-06-99 04:40 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Creepy. I like it. Great for Halloween.
ac
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19 posted 08-06-99 01:05 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

spine tingling and incredibly alluring at the same time...well done...
Cobra
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20 posted 08-07-99 04:21 PM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Thank you all!
elvira
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21 posted 08-09-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i am always fascinated by vampire "stuff"
 
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